Alex--Fun. I love hearing about bike stories and I definitely want to know what happens. I am impressed that you are already revising and taking notes on ideas to make your piece better. Plus, I love how you added humor "they had to pee." Keep revising and writing.
Alex--Fun. I love hearing about bike stories and I definitely want to know what happens. I am impressed that you are already revising and taking notes on ideas to make your piece better. Plus, I love how you added humor "they had to pee." Keep revising and writing.
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